Back story: Laura
She is the Robin Hood of the frozen badlands, the
bringer of goods to the people who need them. She is the protector of the
innocent, slayer of bandits and raiders alike. She rides her trusty steed,
Bernard, into the snow-swept wastelands of Sinai. He name is Laura, and she has
saved Sinai on countless occasions before bedtime.
Laura is a child with a big imagination. She, her
Saint Bernard, and her thieving post-apocalyptic alter ego are usually roaming
around the neighborhood, “stealing treasure” (sweets, small toys, etc. that usually
get returned later) and getting into fights with the bullies that reside there.
As many times as she gets pushed down, she has gotten back up to face them
again another day. The innocent she protects is a sickly boy that cannot come
outside, but she tries her best to make him happy and tells him of her
adventures in the wastelands.
Her parents, who hail from geek culture and show
her the finer points, spur her imagination on. She aspires to be like the
heroes they show her. To protect the innocent like her favorite superheroes and
going on adventures like explorers in the 1950’s are her passion.
Laura may look innocent, but
she is the master thief of the neighborhood, and usually gets away with it with
Bernard by her side. She is a firecracker that is hard to keep up with,
especially on Bernard’s back. Although it is unknown how she managed it, she
rides Bernard like a champion jockey. Bareback!
Attribute
List:
-Mischievous
+ Caring
- Cunning
- Stubborn
+ Imaginative
+ Persistent
- Trouble
- Curious
+ Geeky
+ Firecracker
+ Agile
+ Smart
+ Extrovert
+ Graceful
- Loud
- Naughty
- Quick-Tempered
- Sneaky
- Silly
+ Adaptable
Tollbooth
Exercise:
While out exploring the
neighborhood with Bernard, Laura comes up on an unmanned Tollbooth. It was
guarding a fenced off area, the booth itself was attached to a sliding fence,
like the ones you typically see in gated communities. After stealing cookies
from Ms. Nesbitt, her parents had revoked her allowance for the week. Despite
that, she was still curious to get to the other side. What cool adventures
awaited her on the other side?
Looking around, she tried to
spot any holes in the fence. None. However, not too far away, the fence went
off onto some grass. She grinned, walking over, nearly toughing the fence. She
felt weird being so close. Her hair stood on end when she hovered her hand near
it. It tingled, Bernard whimpering and grabbing the back of her collar. There
was no going through this fence. It was too risky to go under. But…
What about over?
Laura hovered her hand over
the tollbooth itself, walking around it as much as she could. Scaling it should
be easy enough, jumping onto the panel the operator would normally use; she
shifted herself in a better position to climb up on the roof. The blaring wail
of a klaxon startled her out of her thoughts. She looked down to see she had
tripped the alarm. As Bernard barked at her, she jumped off the controls.
With a quick hop, she had
mounted Bernard’s back and both partners high-tailed it out of the area. Laura
looked back to see a guard shouting at them, who disengaged the alarm and
stayed in the booth. What was so important in there that it needed to be
surrounded by an electric fence? Her curiosity burned inside her as the duo
made their way to the hospital.
Maybe next time.
Turning it in early just in case. I had the majority of it done last week, thinking it was due thursday. Just needed a couple tweaks.
ReplyDeleteOverall I think this is a great start! It seems like you have a solid grasp of Laura's character. I would like to see a little more involvement with Bernard in her stories, though, and perhaps more of the relationship between her and the sickly boy. I think you might want to talk about how she delivers these treasures to him and how her adventures stem from her want to make him happy. I think that might centralize the story a little bit more. I know you mentioned how she's just trying to help, but in her back story she sounds a little bit more of a troublemaker who wants attention more than she wants to help other people, so perhaps try to flesh that out. Great start, excited to see where you go with it!
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